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Empty ridden window
Contributed by
jace
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:27:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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Standing at the crumbling stair case
With rain pouring down
Drops trickle down the window pane
And wash away the brown
I can see the emptiness
In the corner of this forgotten place
Lay a lone cracked crystal vase
Alone barren and cold
This simple thing beauty it could not hold
The warm salty rain pours down my face
For I could not go
I stare back at the darkness
And cry out for the vase in this empty ridden window
With the scene I connect
Although I dont know why
Maybe the cracked crystal vase reminds me we all die
Or if I knew how to say
I feel for you this way
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jace
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2005-01-20 13:27:00]
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Re: Empty ridden window
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, though you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title. "Empty"
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Re: Empty ridden window
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:33:49 PM AEST
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| Nice typo |
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