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Confusion; Hatred
Contributed by
Ataraxia
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The words for my hatred I just cant define
I hate the way you wont ever let go
Drilling holes in the back of my mind
Holding me back, not letting me glow
Everyone knows, everyone agrees
That the confusion inside you is not what it seems
I dont understand you, dont get what you mean
The question you ask is unclear, vaugely seen
God, I hate you, I HATE YOU, holding me down
Making sure Im not happy, lingering without sound
Caressing my anger, so fragile, it surely will break
If you tell me that I made one more mistake
You are my weakness, you are my crime
I dont want to try to figure you out this time
This is so pointless, never to be understood
But trying to solve it wont do any good
Copyright ©
Ataraxia
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2005-01-20 16:28:55]
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Re: Confusion; Hatred
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by biggredd on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:31:00 PM AEST
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I actually thought this was really good...it fits many things in life. Very good job.
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Re: Confusion; Hatred
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:29:58 AM AEST
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Very good, the reader can imagine how you feel entirely. Keep writing.
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