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OUT OF TIME
Contributed by
Fwog
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Don't say goodbye as you are leaving
Please just turn and walk away,
Leave me here with my dignity
And I will be okay.
I'll survive this pain you're causing
I understand why you must go,
The love that burned strong in your heart
Is now a dying glow.
I'll recall the sun and laughter
Running barefoot through the glade,
And I will not dwell on shattered dreams
Or the promises you made.
I will quell the pangs of bitterness
And as you leave you'll see me smile,
Don't feel guilty or resentful
We had good times for a while.
Sadly I just didn't grow, you did
like young fruit on the vine,
You deserve the love you're seeking
I'll remain here out of time.
So don't look back as you are leaving
And please don't say goodbye,
When the door is closed and you are gone
That's the time that I will cry.
Copyright ©
Fwog
... [
2002-12-06 18:00:00]
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Re: OUT OF TIME
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by Alexander_McDonald on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 07:13:02 PM AEST
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Very good! I liked it. Excellent tempo. Thoughts well laid out. Easy to understand. It paints an emotional picture with words. I wish more people could write like this.
Thank you.
Alex. |
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Re: OUT OF TIME
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 09:00:54 PM AEST
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| great write, sad but good, ------ hope you had a great birthday, |
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Re: OUT OF TIME
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:45:21 AM AEST
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| Very good emotional write. I can feel the pain in your words. Well done! Larry |
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Re: OUT OF TIME
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 07:25:18 AM AEST
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| Yeah this happens.....and it is very hurtful....i like to do crying time alone ........ Heartfelt write........Tanya...:-) |
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Re: OUT OF TIME
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:54:05 AM AEST
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Dearest Dallas @-<-<<-
Beautiful and eloquent, this is one of my favorites:)
Your friend always,
*Huggs* Nessa |
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