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Fire In The Distance
Contributed by
Ataraxia
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:02:42 PM in AEST
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They all bow down before me
For Im their all, Im their queen
But queen of what? I ask myself
They obviously don't know me well
They strum their lutes and whistle flutes
As I notice something strange
In the corner of my eye, it seems,
The world is up in flames
No one here can see it
No one here but me
I feel alone in the crowd
Why wont it let me be?
I tell them everything will be alright
Theyll get everything they desire
But in the back of my mind
I see someone burning in a fire
The smell of smoke suffocates me
The fire burns in my blood
Someone must know my secret
The end is soon to come
Copyright ©
Ataraxia
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2005-01-20 19:02:42]
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Re: Fire In The Distance
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by justjonesy on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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| i really liked this one....i feel like its hiding something..im trying to figure it out....great job |
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Re: Fire In The Distance
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:08:27 PM AEST
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| This is a strange story, but interesting - especially at the ending. Makes me wonder what the secret is. Nice write. Cheers! |
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