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the woulds in my life...
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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i would like to feel love
and i do (sumtimes)
i would like to experience life
and i have (sum)
i would like to feel trust
and i do
i would like to feel joy
and i do
i wouldnt like to feel pain
but i do
i wouldnt like to feel anger
but i do
i wouldnt like to feel hate
but i do
i wouldnt like to experience resent
but i do
i feel all of these emotions
exept the most important one...
happiness
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Re: the woulds in my life...
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:59:58 PM AEST
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| very original... incredible write* |
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Re: the woulds in my life...
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by tractorbabe on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:40:08 PM AEST
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great poem.....emotions are strong and hurtfull....luv always
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Re: the woulds in my life...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:03:31 PM AEST
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| You have a good idea in this poem, but I feel you could expand on it a bit. Not sure how you would do that, as it's an individualistic thing - maybe more description of these emotions. Anyway, it's a good idea for a poem. Cheers! |
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