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Hope, Be Gone
Contributed by
luinil
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:56:54 PM in AEST
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Hope, you taunt my tattered will
And plague my restless dreams
Shadow the face of love unreal
And charily slit my seams
Hope, you mock with every breath
And bind an absent touch
Burn me with what flame is left
And steal the one I clutch
Hope be gone and speak no more
Let me fall to sleep
Free me of your drowning scorn
And throw me to the deep
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luinil
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2005-01-20 20:56:54]
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Re: Hope, Be Gone
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by breny on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:23:37 PM AEST
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this shows your feelings very well and the structure of this poem is very good.
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