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Paranoid
Contributed by
QueenEEliz33
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:21:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Paranoid
This feeling cant be explained it brings me closer and closer to insanity with every minute. You cant move a single inch without staring into nothing, waiting to be caught, silence! Silence assures you that you are safe, but slowly drives you insane. There is no such thing as silence. Boom, tick, bump, and the voices, theres always voices. Is someone walking slowly up the stairs ready to peer slowly through the door with no warning, there is no time to avoid! Hold your breathe, stay very still, listen with intense focus. Is someone there? There is always someone there. No time to relax. Time, hours on end! My muscles are stained, tick-tock, tick-tock all night long, I fear Im going insane, insane? What was that I hear? Forever disturbed.
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Re: Paranoid
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by littlemo911 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:27:02 PM AEST
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| interesting. i like how its not like any other standard poems. everything bunch up together and chaotic. it gives me a feeling of your paranoia. |
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Re: Paranoid
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:14:52 AM AEST
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being paranoid sucks but you did a good job of explaining it.
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