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Abused
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:53:37 PM in AEST
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Abused
You were destroyed
Slowly since birth
The bruises
And emotions
Taking your worth
Abused for no reason
The person doing it
Never accused
Whoever abuses you
Deserves to die
For making you cry
Every single night
But then I found out
That it is you
Who abuses yourself
And makes yourself cry
It is you, who deserves to die
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-20 21:53:37]
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Re: Abused
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:55:08 PM AEST
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| This is perfect..The anger and the flow really knocked you out..I give this 2 thumbs up way way up.. |
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Re: Abused
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by Whitelightning77 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:38:13 PM AEST
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Too often true that we are our worst abusers.
thanks for sharing
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Re: Abused
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:06:22 PM AEST
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| Plain and simple, Is it worth it though? |
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Re: Abused
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:23:52 PM AEST
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Hmm very well written and I loved the twist at
the end very dark and it hit me deep since I
have abused myself many times before. Keep
up the writing because your stuff kicks ass.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Abused
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by juliette on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:30:48 PM AEST
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Loved that last stanza -
so pitifully true......
Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: Abused
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by silent on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:53:32 PM AEST
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| Interesting spin on things, good write. |
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Re: Abused
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:37:41 AM AEST
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| wow very intense and emotional.well done. |
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