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Confused
Contributed by
o7neves
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:39:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Youre so dumb cant you see
When youre with him youre so free
Why must you be so damn easy
I hope he doesnt think you are sleazy
But I think that you just dont care
Because you love it when he pulls your hair
I know its hard when the attraction is so strong
And even harder when you dont see him for so long
But who am I to tell you what you should do
I give you my blessing and pray his feelings are true
Come to think of it I hope yours are too
Cuz Id hate to see him all sad and blue
But you guys are both grown adults
So its all up to you if you use his handcuffs
I personally think that nothing good can come from this
Are you both sure youre not each others mistress?
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o7neves
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2005-01-21 01:39:18]
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Re: Confused
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:11:47 AM AEST
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| hmm very interesting to reads.your write saids alot.well done. |
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Re: Confused
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:51:34 AM AEST
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Very interesting concept. U know if you thought this out and what not maybe this is just another way that your mind is perceiving whats been going on, u know what I'm trying to say?
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Re: Confused
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:52:38 PM AEST
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| very nice poem from an outside view of what you were going thru. Who was this wit? 33 |
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Re: Confused
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:29:15 PM AEST
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| Hmm....I really liked this piece. It was very interesting. I often think about how others perceive me too. Nice work. |
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