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Contributed by
o7neves
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:41:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Hes so gorgeous
Hes so fine
Makes me wish
Hes all mine
Hes kinda tall
And a little slim
Has a great bod
And goes to the gym
Hes so funny
And smells so good
Makes that money
To pay for his hood!
Hes so smooth
With his words
Hes that good
With all the girls
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2005-01-21 01:41:14]
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Re: ????
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by supergirlblibs on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:15:06 AM AEST
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| Fantastic! He sounds great! Go get him :P |
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Re: ????
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by Sinned on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 04:13:39 AM AEST
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You could have named your poem---Hmmmm.Young guys often state hmmmm when noticing a nice looking chick.Don't step to fast.
good write
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Re: ????
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by brew on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:02:30 AM AEST
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Not bad........a write about looking, and dreaming. If the dream is worth it, then go for it.
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Re: ????
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by Dec2three198five on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:34:40 PM AEST
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| This poem is hott. I love the flow. 33 |
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Re: ????
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:56:03 PM AEST
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| :-) Cute write! |
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Re: ????
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:26:20 AM AEST
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short and sweet :) just like this comment, great job tanya!
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