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Questions Answers?
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:54:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When your heart is broken
And you dont know what to do
When the pain wont lessen
And he no longer wants you
What do you do?
How do you go on?
Will the pain ever be through?
Will you ever again be strong?
No change can I make
Its out of my hands
No promise did I break
I cant meet his demands
I want an answer
To bring this to an end
I cant find it in anger
It prevents the mend
In sadness too
All hope is lost
The love that flew
Left my heart in frost
From footprint to footprint
One breath to another
Whatever lifes imprint
Love possessed, you must savor
It leaves with such speed
When its gone you will know
Your heart will bleed
And its pain will show
Watch out what the heart bestirs
Fear to trust its sight
I dont have all the answers
Not to be found, even in hindsight
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-01-21 07:54:19]
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Re: Questions Answers?
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:22:55 AM AEST
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Re: Questions Answers?
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by Stitch on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:37:43 AM AEST
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Answers can take years to show up. Only in maturity does the best path become clear. Anger and time are important to work through the hurt and come to a place of acceptance. You have stated your feelings well. Watch your use of "it's" though. It means "it is" and that's all it means. It isn't the possessive form...that is "its."
Stitch
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