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Estrellas
Contributed by
humboldthunny17
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:04:09 AM in AEST
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Me encantadan estrellas (I love stars) Porque? (Why?) Por que estrellas son pequeno, pero union y donar luz a oscuras (Because stars are small, but they join together and give light in the dark)
Estrellas son tener en poco (stars are underestimated) Si, pequeno, pero grande (yes, small, but big) Grande en la noche cuando mi rompers viaje sus via derribar (Big in the night when my tears travel their way down to the ground) Grande en my aminar (Big in my spirit)
Pequeno luces, natuaral, bonitas estreallas (Small lights, natural, beautiful stars) Me encantadan estrellas (I love stars) Porque? (why?) Por que estreallas donar me viva (Because stars give me life)
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Re: Estrellas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:18:59 PM AEST (User
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Su español no es malo. Hay unos errores, pero, para español uno,el poecía es casi perfecto. Si quiere ayuda, por favor, me pregunta.
(Your spanish isn't bad. There are a few errors, but for spanish one, the poetry is almost perfect. If you want help (or corrections) please (feel free) to ask me) |
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Re: Estrellas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:32:00 PM AEST (User
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¡Se me olvide! Me ENCANTA su poema. Escribe muy bien. |
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