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Never Give Up The PEN
Contributed by
Putteragain
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:02:25 AM in AEST
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Never give up the pen
poet women
poet men
the world would be empty
if words
were not so tempting
laid on sheete of broken tree
for all
the world to see
love and hate sex and sin
formed from heart
deep within
brought to life our very dreams
of memories kept
passion gleams
release rejoice to all i say
poets forever
and a day
Copyright ©
Putteragain
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2005-01-21 11:02:25]
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:10:22 AM AEST
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| Great..and that's right.. and you got help from a good source.. |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:29:55 AM AEST
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well written and good advice...what better way to express ourselves
NS |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:32:00 AM AEST
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good idea. don't intend to. :-)
Nice write! |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:32:53 AM AEST
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| So true... us poets should never give up the pen, we all have a gift and we should use it as often as possible. Thanks for this. |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:33:59 PM AEST
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you recieved sage advice and dont you dare give it up
Michelle |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:46:26 PM AEST
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I'm honered to be of some sort of inspiration...especially to such an excellent poet. I liked that broken tree line especially.
Thank you my friend
Larry |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:47:34 PM AEST
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not only unable to write...I cant spell either
( smacks forehead) |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:30:42 PM AEST
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Never give up..ever. You have a beautiful talent, as have all the others who have or are thinking of giving up.
It's is a gift we should not throw away...
Great write hun. So very true.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:29:03 PM AEST
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Nice write, i love the overall piece. Everything blends beautifully, great write.
Jane x |
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Re: Never Give Up The PEN
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:47:01 PM AEST
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this is lovely michelle, i have a lot of catching up to do but i will!! hugs n' love nessa
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