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Reprieve
Contributed by
jace
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I sit in the graveyard
Wondering who will speak to me
These feelings deep down I must guard
From your picture perfect world I had to flee
I walked alone the people engulfed me
I try to blend in
People stare the fire in my eyes and the scar is all they see
They wonder were I've been
You enjoy your life of opportunity
You hope in the people that love you
Maybe you have a special immunity
to grief, pan and hatred of what stupid people do
I just cant move on in this horrible world with
One fist clenched and the other seeking you
I must have a reprieve
A relief and I believe that hope is
You
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jace
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2005-01-21 12:09:04]
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Re: Reprieve
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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| Why does this make me think of "Harold and Maude"? Anyway, it sounds hopeful for you. Blessings. |
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Re: Reprieve
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:45:30 PM AEST
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Awww. You know..maybe we all have that oneperson, who gets us through? I don't know..
This is lovely. Hopeful and sweet.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Reprieve
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:12:46 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. But I believe for me, there is no reprieve. I have no more chances.
But a good poem noneoftheless |
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