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Past Tense
Contributed by
evilapple
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Time has gone for my sorrow You tell me every time Everyone that came by Made it faster Still I'm Shy Time was wasted Standing amongst the lonely people The only one I can't see is you A hand not held A tear not shed Time has gone Don't start trying Too late to realise All the tension I thought I kept I shared
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2002-12-06 21:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Past Tense
(User Rating: 1 ) by notsocallous on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:44:33 AM AEST (User
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Too true in too many places. I particularly like the ending on this. Took me a second or two to get a feel for the flow of this, but I am up pretty late. |
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