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She
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:19:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She is my friend I met days ago when
I then tried to use an idle dull pen.
She met me upon the stage where few men
seek to lay their souls ignobly open.
My computer gave an instant access
into a far distant poets' corner.
Posted signs said weak men shouldn't trespass
frightful zone where I would be a goner.
She thought my words seemed much fine to eyes there
so her sweet response encouraged greatly.
I have entered poets' hidden site's lair
making my dumb dribble ever sightly.
She has a soft nice voice saying keep on.
I guess I will like a mighty Samson.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2005-01-21 15:19:11]
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Re: She
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:34:41 PM AEST
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| That's such a sweet write, very nice. It's amazing how people find friends online, sometimes. Cheers! |
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Re: She
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:38:15 PM AEST
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like mighty Samson , I like it . Witty piece of poetry and your thoughtfulness shines
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Re: She
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by freckle on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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| Cool poem. |
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Re: She
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by ArmyBrat on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:11:37 PM AEST
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| That's really good |
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Re: She
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:18:33 AM AEST
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Very, very nice. A joy to read!
Stitch |
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