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The Girl
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 04:51:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The girl stood not feeling the cold, or the warmth
She couldn't tell whether it was light or whether night had come early that day
She couldn't see the figures running towards her trying to touch her
She didn't feel the strange vibe from her fellow class mates
She didn't realise that the rain on her face,that day was mixed with tears and blood
The day the person that she had ever shown her true self to was shot
The girl stood not feeling the cold, or the warmth
The girl stood alone...
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2005-01-21 16:51:08]
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Re: The Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:35:13 PM AEST
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Re: The Girl
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by waos on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:01:25 PM AEST
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not bad, its interesting, it leaves some things left to the reader to decide...
nice job
~waos/kara |
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