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Eternal torment in hell
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As they sat on the rock, lost in each others eyes Their lips drew closer, Bliss dosent describe the feeling They felt when their lips met
The secret she kept, the lie she told him It came out in the form of a boy As he caught them, he draws his gun Putting a hole though her lovers head
Her screams resound through the mountains They grow louder as he starts to brutally beat her Watching as she cowers in the corner Begging for mercy, a smile appears on his face
Her pain has yet begun, he comes toward her Terror growing with every step he takes Evil radiating out of his eyes He savagely rapes her and sends bullets through her heart
He walks away crying, memories attacking without mercy He wishes the memories away, the gun fits perfectly in his mouth Regretting killing the only person he ever loved The last bullet sends him to his fate, eternal torment in hell
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2005-01-21 18:35:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eternal torment in hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by alliecat on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:07:15 PM AEST (User
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the vivid description left me feeling the pain that he felt.....i like the poem alot....keep writing |
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