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Faded Reflection
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:39:24 PM in AEST
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Faded Reflection
I cut my wrists
Without a blade
All of this pain
Cuts the veins
I shatter the mirror
By turning away
My reflection fades
But it's still the same
I don't remember
Yesterday
Or being frayed
But the scars remain
Forgetting is bliss
But I can't turn away
From the reflection that fades
Along with all of my pain
But the scars remain
And forgetting was in vain
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Re: Faded Reflection
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by afterdark on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:03:26 PM AEST
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Very well done..Forgetting is bliss
But I can't turn away
From the reflection that fades
Along with all of my pain
That is great right there...You know I would hate to have someone like You get this lost. |
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Re: Faded Reflection
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by Whitelightning77 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:46:35 PM AEST
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well written E9 - few words but powerfully placed in poetic form.
thanks for sharing!
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Re: Faded Reflection
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:10:48 PM AEST
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yes
wounds heal
tough sometimes to slowly
but the scars
they always rmain. |
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Re: Faded Reflection
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 07:20:37 PM AEST
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i absolutely loved it...ahhh the pain...the scars fade away with time...
summer |
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