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With Out You (longer)
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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With you,I was almost happy
Now I sit here once again feeling crappy
With you,Forgetting About the Past
But me and you didnt last
With you,Forgetting everything that made me mad
I mope around everywhere feeling sad
But your gone and Im the one to blame
I still wanna be with you but I feel the shame
Everything we were
Is now just a blur
In my mind memories of you I cannot find
I cant sleep
I just lay awake and weep
I sit on my bed all day long
Wishing I was dead what went so wrong?
A blade is my only comfort
Without you I feel like cheap dirt
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2005-01-21 19:47:18]
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Re: With Out You (longer)
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by Daniels_Princess on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:52:53 PM AEST
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| Ive been there before..and it hurts so bad..sometimes it feels like everything is wrong, and now nothing can ever be right again..But pain does heal..you just have to give it time, and believe..Good job with the poem. |
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Re: With Out You (longer)
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:25:48 PM AEST
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| what you feel and what you are, are different things. talent flows from the fingers. |
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