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Pale Purity
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pale Purity
Her brown eyes
Stare through strands
Of brown hair
Her face of paleness
Sheltered from strangers
Except for herself
Since it still isn't found
Her eyes
Show nothing
The fire's died
Within the black hole
Of her eyes
And her life
Her wrists show
Where the tensions flow
Where the razor goes
Her wrists show
There's reason to live for
Etched in mistakes
Made from pain
Etched in mistakes
For the diary kept every day
Her eyes blackened
Like her soul
Her lips reddened
For the loss of blood
Her face whitened
For the tainted purity
Of undying love
And for today
I etch in another mistake
To cause my decay
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-21 22:06:21]
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Re: Pale Purity
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:08:47 PM AEST
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| hmmm I shivver hoping its just from the fever. |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:31:01 AM AEST
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Ohh was that dark or what. I enjoyed reading this write 100% I love how you wrote it. Cool poem.
Jane x |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:23:15 AM AEST
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| This was very good Jennifer..You have a talent for writes that are above others.This subject is one that shall I say is done quite a lot here..Cutting cutting and more cutting..However when I have read one's by you they stand out far more then anyone else.. |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by Val-Hundra on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:19:10 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Funny how scars can say more to people than telling in words... Keep creating and add to the world. |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:49:02 PM AEST
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such a sad, yet well written poem. I loved
this it was so honest and written very
poetically. I can relate to this all to well, but I
want to say there IS life beyond the pain. Keep
on writing and letting your pain create works
of art like this one. Soon the sun will shine
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:32:10 AM AEST
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| .vivid and cool write..though dark..:-)venkat |
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Re: Pale Purity
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by killingmehslowly on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:50:38 PM AEST
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Dark and wonderful. Scars are a painful yet semi-wonderful reminder of things done wrong. Kind of like a wake-up call. Great write
-Sami- |
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