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Mom
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:26:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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IM GROUNDED! I did nothing wrong Aight, at least tell me for how long SIX WEEKS! Have you lost your mind That does it, this is the last time I know, Ill pack my bags and go I wont put up with this stuff no mo Aight, cool, now Im on my own Im traveling to find a new home No more bedtime, no more brushing my teeth Just me, my bags, and my own two feet Lets see, this cardboard box seems like a good place to stay I can live how I want to and do this my own way Now Im getting hungry Ill find something for a snack Lets see what I put in my backpack Aha! A candy bar, boy, my favorite Ill eat it all, no need to save it I can find more good stuff to eat Boy I love living on the street Okay, now Im cold, but I have no jacket Dang, I didnt think to pack it The roof of my house is leaking on me Plus, Im too afraid to go pee Its dark outside and I didnt bring a light Am I really going to stay out here all night What was that noise is something out there Its okay, Im not scared Oh shoot, I just peed in my jeans Why couldnt I see just what my mom means To me and to my whole life Ive got to go back and make it right I run back to the house and my mom is bawling Wait a minute whos that shes calling Mommy Mommy hang up Im back I cant believe I did something like that She looks at me with eyes of steel I suddenly realize how it made her feel When I left, I was really scared But now Im back and I can tell she cared Her eyes grow soft life a teddy bear We just stand there and look at each other in a loving stare She gives me a big hug and holds me tight I didnt know what happened you gave me a fright Im so glad youre home I almost lost my mind But guess what, now you can double your time Oh yeah, I was mad But that night made me realize what I really had
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Re: Mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:07:30 AM AEST (User
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LMAO that was brilliant, i love the pattern and the ryming scheme of it. I enjoyed reading this funny poem 100%. Good write.
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Re: Mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by vanilla_flame on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:55:01 PM AEST (User
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awesome! it has humor, but also is very serious. good job
vanilla_flame
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