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Destiny
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:34:50 AM in AEST
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Destiny
Destiny to what
I dont feel love is my destiny
Faith
Do I have faith
Faith in certain things yes
But faith in love I dont know
I want to love for the rest of my life
To find the one
Ive been hurt
Burned
Seen others fall seen them fail
Destiny
Destiny to be hurt
Thats all I see
They think theyre perfect for each other
Then it ends as fast as it starts
They all seem to get burned
Movies are the only places you really see destiny come to play
A life without love isnt a life at all
Well then I have no life
I have no love left to give
My heart
Tired and weak
But for you Ill have faith but Ill keep my love locked away
Away from you so itll stay strong
I just cant cry again
I wont cry again
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Re: Destiny
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:03:43 AM AEST
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The writing was ok, but the message you where giving was really nice and sweet with a touch of sadness to it. Its a crearive write i liked it.
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Re: Destiny
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by NeonHusky on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:48:18 AM AEST
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A poem about heart break i see, and how things only work in movies....very good, the choppy lines express the pain, as though someone were sobbing the lines. this line:A life without love isn’t a life at all. is the exact same line i used in a heart break poem i wrote several months ago.....keep it up
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Re: Destiny
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by Azul_Panther on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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| Ahhh, don't lock your self away. My friend tried and it's killin' her and I yeah, sorry I babble. Heehee. Loved the poem though |
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Re: Destiny
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:17:25 PM AEST
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| DESTINY?i'm hopen my destiny involves a certain someone hint hint nudge nudge!anyways u really shouldnt become a hider,if ur a hider and u hide away everythng 1 day ur just gonna explode and during the process of hiding u might hurt urself even more or even someone else,anyways good write,loved it but i love u even more |
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Re: Destiny
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by LanieBug on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:38:18 AM AEST
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| i so totally get it now after reading this! just be strong listen to ur heart and please dont just give up. im not willing to, b/c i see my destiny in ur eyes- LOVE U!!!!!! |
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