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Dont let go
Contributed by
allymp
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:28:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I look at you
And I miss what we had
It was a friendship that couldn't be explained
Now we dont talk
Or hangout much at all
Who would've thought it'd cause so much pain
Though I want you back
It's just not the same
And that love will probably never return
I don't see you the same,
Although your still beautiful
There must be something here to be learned
And now I ask
What happened to us
How could a bind so beautiful collapse
I guess I should
Try to forget about this
And put it all in the past
...But I couldn't do that
It wouldn't be right
I couldn't live with such deep regret
So I'll continue
To hold on to
What little of this is left not yet dead
I will always love you
So please, I ask
Don't let go
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allymp
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2005-01-22 09:28:04]
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Re: Dont let go
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:43:21 AM AEST
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Great write, I'm really sorry about your friendship with that person.Thanks for sharing.
=Jen= |
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Re: Dont let go
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by Val-Hundra on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:13:11 AM AEST
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| It always hurts when something so wonderful ends. Even if people tell you to let go... don't. But find other new beautiful things as well. Wonderful poem. Keep writing. |
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Re: Dont let go
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:44:19 PM AEST
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This is kind of poignant. It's kind of left up to the reader (as well as how the reader relates to this piece) to determine whether this is a friend or something more (regardless of what it means to you as the author). That is very effective in this poem. The way you describe the bond between the people is really great.
Overall, I'd say this is a pretty good poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Dont let go
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by Sinned on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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It is a shame,but then friendships and even families often drift apart.No ones fault it just happens.
good writing.
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Re: Dont let go
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:29:05 PM AEST
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| I've been there before. It's incredibly hard, but it makes you stronger. Five stars from me. |
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Re: Dont let go
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:08:27 AM AEST
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Amazing write. I can really relate... keep your chin up, and know that if you let go, it will be easier... I know it sounds crazy, but, take it from someone who lost a mother, you have to let go...
God Bless!
*~Erin~* |
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Re: Dont let go
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:08:28 AM AEST
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Amazing write. I can really relate... keep your chin up, and know that if you let go, it will be easier... I know it sounds crazy, but, take it from someone who lost a mother, you have to let go...
God Bless!
*~Erin~* |
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