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Forever
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:54:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fresh rays born of the morning
glittered the dawn with a charismatic importance
your soft palm embracing my own
only to reassure this moment of phantasmal ecstasy
could not be severed by a sorrowful cry
nor a broken whisper
this hope screams throughout the vessels
of my beaten body
reclaiming it's right to bliss
our love will endure the mocking of weakness
as the sun will triumph over the moon's violent glow
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bonita2689
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2005-01-22 10:54:53]
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Re: Forever
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:48:07 AM AEST
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Woah...
This is excellent.
Some of the words in this are just great.
And it really is a poem a person can fall into.
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Forever
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:22:18 PM AEST
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you were right, this is a good one :) I liked the your choice of words for this poem.
Curtis |
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:11:14 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. Great choice of words. I love it. |
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