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Eternity
Contributed by
fielding88
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How should you promote a primal urge?
Something deep inside you should never purge?
I have an idea that transcends above
All opposing forces,
And that would be love.
A feeling so obvious right before my eyes
Would make sure creation never dies,
And while its message may be sent to all,
Every single soul
Would never hear its call.
Love will be so strong to stand on two feet
And by doing so, all my goals it would meet,
But a feeling so strong has more than one purpose
And while you love one another,
Its the urge you will miss.
Love the greatest conduit for one to procreate
Until your lives are judged by the hands of fate
To end your existence, remove your stains
From the world, but yet,
Love remains.
Copyright ©
fielding88
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2005-01-22 12:35:17]
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Re: Eternity
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:19:45 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, i really enjoyed it :)
Curtis |
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Re: Eternity
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:23:17 PM AEST
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Very nice. Interesting the way it came to you. Nice job.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, and very true!
Nice job on this ;)
~Kt |
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Re: Eternity
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:58:55 PM AEST
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| =] very nice ending, marc. good post actually too. obviously you can rhyme and make good endings. I SHALL WIN THIS COMPETITION. =] |
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Re: Eternity
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:05:51 PM AEST
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Again, one of my favorites. This was a masterpiece, the ending absolutely phenominal, I always love an excellent ending and you're just the one to provide it.
Well done!
--amanda-- |
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