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I Do Love You
Contributed by
Elf
on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:04:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I fall down
You pick me up.
When I am sad
You cheer me up.
When he broke my heart
you let me cry
and picked up the pieces,
or all you could find.
When I am hurt
You tend my wound.
When I am ill
You sing to me by light of moon.
Through all these times
I have found
That I do love you
With passion unbound.
Here I stand
I give you my heart.
I can only hope
We'll never part.
For who would help
When I am down?
Or pick my life up
Off of the ground?
Or when I am hurt
Or sad or ill?
There's no other
For your place to fill.
I do love you
This I swear.
I give you my heart
Only for you I care.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2005-01-22 13:04:06]
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Re: I Do Love You
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:12:11 PM AEST
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| i absoloutly love this piece, its made me realise something about my own life. thankyou xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: I Do Love You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:15:25 PM AEST
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hey,
aww dude this is sooo cute,beautiful write,so much emotion,and i know just how u feel,for that person you always wished for, to finally get there=),luck and best wishes.t/c.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: I Do Love You
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:30:47 PM AEST
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nice job, great declaration of your love :)
Curtis |
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