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Dreaming of Life in Water
Contributed by
JasTrask_22
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 03:09:05 PM in AEST
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Dreaming of Life In Water
i stare into the blue in the poster on the wall
it makes me think...i wish i was there
then i notice my skin is gray and it has changed
now i feel like im getting all rearranged
i feel my hands turning into fins
when i look down, i cant believe what i see
my feet are not apart, they are together in one
and then i look up, to see the sun
i feel water around me and have the urge...
to jump into the air and crash into the deep blue
i swim down deep to the bottom of the ocean floor
i see gold, diamonds, and precious jewels galore
i hear someone call out my name from a far
i snap back to reality and focus again
the lesson he is teaching is such a bore to me
i just want to go back into my dream world fantasies
By: Jasmine Trask Gr:9
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2005-01-22 15:09:05]
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Re: Dreaming of Life in Water
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 03:26:17 PM AEST
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This is lovely...I always dream about being a Mermaid, tho dolphins fascinate me...... Enjoyed this very much.
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Re: Dreaming of Life in Water
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:26:23 PM AEST
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excellent title and poem, great images, i hope you got an a+! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dreaming of Life in Water
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by Dreama on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:22:49 PM AEST
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I liked the write! good imagination and imagery :P keep it up!
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