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Your Poem
Contributed by
akaimeridia
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:26:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you...
The day was mine
I used it well
A wonder, so the stories tell
A kiss so sweet
A yearning strong
Found hearts that knew it all along
You took my hand inside your own
A single star so brightly shone
I turned my face, my downcast eyes
To hide in shadows my surprise
And then you whispered in my ear
Three words I never dreamed I'd hear
...I love you
And if upon that quiet day
I hadn't let it be this way
My heart would be so empty now
I'd never know the why, or how
Of what it's like to be complete
And have a love that's so concrete
So now, the stories do recall
A love that conquered more than all
That no words can describe how true
And this, my love, I have for you
Copyright ©
akaimeridia
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2005-01-22 17:26:19]
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Re: Your Poem
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:33:41 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful.... |
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Re: Your Poem
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by bibi on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:42:41 PM AEST
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| NICE |
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Re: Your Poem
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 06:52:49 PM AEST
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Aww! Lovely write. So sweet
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Re: Your Poem
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:06:50 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem written with the innocence of a child, so heart felt, love has found you . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Your Poem
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:43:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is so beautiful, i feel the same way about my ex bf.
Great romantic write.
I love it.
Jane x |
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