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Gone, Lost Somewhere
Contributed by
o7neves
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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What can I do to stop your tears?
I know; but thats what startles my fears
You dont think that I cry too?
Well let me assure you, thats something I do!
Youve got my thoughts all tossed around
I hope that soon theyll all be found
I didnt want things to end this way
All along I thought that I would stay
I dont know if what Im doing is right or wrong
But youve got me wondering where it is that I belong
I hope you know this for me isnt easy
And I still really do miss you Sweetie!
Please try and see things from my point of view
Soon you wont even give me a second thought, just like an old shoe!
I want you to know this
And I really do mean it
You are so perfect, I never saw a flaw
So dont let this piece of ****, leave your heart raw!
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2005-01-22 22:18:22]
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:47:03 PM AEST
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Sweet and loving poem.
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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awww ...
good write. |
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:21:49 PM AEST
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| very nice. though there are some forced rhymes in this. |
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by Dec2three198five on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:01:27 AM AEST
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| if all this is true, i hope you told Dania all of it. I hope she reads this poem. You're such a great person and friends. That's what's wrong in the world. Guys like that makes guys like me don't exist to good and faithful ladies. 33 |
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by LaDyD on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:50:10 PM AEST
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First i want to say this is a really great poem.... second it just dont make sense how u can say u cry for this person and miss this person and ur both unhappy being apart yet ur not together but, i guess life just dont make sence =/
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Re: Gone, Lost Somewhere
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:24:36 AM AEST
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wonderful :) this poem really lets me know your feelings toward her, and just how much letting her go hurt you. I know it was hard, but like i always say things do happen for a reason...
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