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Fall Asleep
Contributed by
Joker17
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Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Fall Asleep - by J. Samuelson Copyright2001 07/19
Toss and turn all night
But how much can I take?
The stress of everything
Is what keeps me awake.
My body is exhausted
Frustration growing deep
Cant seem to ease my mind
And make me Fall Asleep.
Life is overwhelming
Nothing offers me relief
Cant get passed impatience
And make me Fall Asleep.
Just close my eyes and stare
For hours into black
But wide awake as ever
I need to get on track.
I crave the dreams Im missing
I pray my soul to keep
One night to clear my mind
And let me Fall Asleep.
This constant aggravation
These thoughts controlling me
Cant lay them all to rest
My stress wont let it be.
I pray the night will come
Ill find a peace so deep
And let frustration go
And finally Fall Asleep.
Copyright ©
Joker17
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2002-12-06 22:00:00]
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Re: Fall Asleep
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:49:07 AM AEST
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| Good write! |
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Re: Fall Asleep
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by okokjazz on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:56:51 PM AEST
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| quite like this...like the monotony of the rhyme scheme...just sometimes ur rhymes seem a bit contrived - maybe watch out. REAlly nice tho! xx |
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Re: Fall Asleep
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 07:31:04 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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