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The Chill and The Cane
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:32:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The chill is here
To pass you by
Give you pain
Make you cry
Sometimes you will even die
This is the chill
The cane is here
To show you that it cares
To whip you when you are bad
Or comfort you when you are sad
This is the cane
The chill is someone mean and deceitful
Like an enemy
The cane is someone sweet and kind
Like a friend
One always by your side
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UnlovedChild
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2005-01-23 01:32:50]
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Re: The Chill and The Cane
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:45:31 AM AEST
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Re: The Chill and The Cane
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:18:33 AM AEST
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Ohh that was chilling and sad at the same time.
A very tragic poem filled with pain and sadness to it.
Great write as always Amy.
Love it.
Jane x |
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