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Untitled
Contributed by
Xnoybis
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:49:54 AM in AEST
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Mother
Corner stone
Counter stone of Father
Such a base you make!
Always there to steady me
when I may tremble or shake
But what is to become
when one day
you are not there
to say I am the parts of your sum?
Then onward I must tread
Despite all that I feel
Minus all the spite I feel
I know that you have lead
Me to some place
some space
that is my own
which I must face
And with chin on the up
And love in my cup
I move forward confidently
to make it my own!
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2005-01-23 04:49:54]
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Re: Untitled
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by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:53:54 AM AEST
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| Damn it. That was supposed to say: Inspired by bigtig6269's poem "Mom," because I agree with him. Dedicated to my own mum who is, as they say, dead. |
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Re: Untitled
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:04:36 AM AEST
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I read his poem yesterday and i just loved it.
Great write as well, i love it.
Jane x |
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