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Ravage
Contributed by
Crow
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stepping back through her yesterdays
memories gather like leaves
all the kisses and promised lovers
carry unbearable weight.
The candles are burning
tears flow as she touches
her past.
Here in the dim of a hopeless tomorrow
smothers the will for today.
For her no roses
no soul to to take her heart
Life bled through her constant
searching, wept for the dust
at her feet.
Night will take her
always a place lovers cry
rest forever ravaged days
smoothed by hands that held on so long....Crow
Copyright ©
Crow
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2005-01-23 17:18:00]
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Re: Ravage
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:36:16 PM AEST
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I find this tragically sad.....in fact my heart sinks as I read it.
such a waste...such a waste.
I pray this woman finds her happiness and peace.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Ravage
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:19:32 AM AEST
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| Such sadness & pain...... amazing piece of poetry! |
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Re: Ravage
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:54:33 PM AEST
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beautiful in its sadness a lovely write
Michelle |
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Re: Ravage
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by Crow on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:59:03 PM AEST
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thank you for reading me, and the comments.
somedays aren`t measured..anything gets-in. thank you again..Lane |
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Re: Ravage
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by DrowningHeart on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:46:16 AM AEST
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Absolutely one of my favorite, i'm personaly touch by this poem.
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