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simple yet perfect
Contributed by
Keila
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I never thought I could get lost like this,
I told myself it would never do.
Too much responsibility too much time lost.
Why open myself to all the pain
Why trouble myself with all the lies.
Now I know,
All the glances across the room,
The notes passed between us.
The looks you give,
The looks you receive.
All the sweet things you say,
Knowing I cant give that away
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-01-23 17:34:13]
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Re: simple yet perfect
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:36:58 PM AEST
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| Sweet....sloppy is allowed....love is fun to write about. |
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Re: simple yet perfect
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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nothing sloppy about honesty or love i just saw a beautiful poem . . .
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Re: simple yet perfect
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:44:33 PM AEST
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| sweet, sweet. I'm so jealous. I have nothing to inspire poems like this anymore. |
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