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Lost
Contributed by
dream_protector_bp
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 09:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Lost-is the light in my eyes.
Lost -is the strength that i hold.
Lost -is the truth among lies.
Lost-are the stories told.
Lost -is the will to live
Lost-is the truth in the night
Lost-are the gifts that you give
Lost- is the power of sight
Lost-has become my name
Lost-am i to darkest night
Lost- is my passion flame
Lost-my soul in white
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2005-01-23 21:53:47]
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:00:18 PM AEST
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| Great first write. Welcome to the site. I look forward to reading more of your work. :-) |
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Re: Lost
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by prozac_memory on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:00:25 AM AEST
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i like this poem alot, thanks for sharing
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Re: Lost
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:28:10 AM AEST
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I like the brefity of this. Watch some of your caps, and you might consider M dashes (---) rather than just hyphens here.
Stitch |
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