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Don't Forget
Contributed by
QueenEEliz33
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:51:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dont Forget
Its hard sometimes to remember.quick there! Turn here!
Through my dramatic spinning world
But it cant dissolve in my raging self
It is always there
My life
My body focuses on my traumas occurring sporadically through the days
But pause
Whats really there?
My love, my gifts, my luck
Blessing me with my every breathe
My words are often pathetic, filled with misery and pity
My eyes must be peeled of the little frets I endure
And open to the luck placed upon me
The love of my friends
Burst through the toughest struggles
Kris brings my heart and soul full of life
My home feels so secure and safe
My future so long and open
Its all for me
Forget my self and remember my being.
Copyright ©
QueenEEliz33
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2005-01-24 00:51:35]
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Re: Don't Forget
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by secretwind on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:03:52 AM AEST
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Innervisions of the Queen
flow and crescendo
and become a rainbow. |
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Re: Don't Forget
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:06:42 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write... keep me on my toes..good job |
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Re: Don't Forget
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by bluebird on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:18:11 AM AEST
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i love the word you have used with the style of it,fitted well and kept me upbeat and wanting to read on.
~keep the faith~
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