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Givin In
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cold and all alone
and unknown
starting to feel so good
here in the shadows
where I hide...
innervisions
ebb and flow as I cry
cause there's nothing to believe in
I'm just waiting to die.
Frantically I dance
away from romance
there's just no time
I'm to busy givin in
lust always win,
I'm tragically twistin
and no one listens
so I no longer try.
Broken and bleeding
I laugh
as I cry
cause I'm just waiting to die.
Mentally breaking down!!!
cold and all alone
in the shadows
hmm
I kinda like it now....
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secretwind
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2005-01-24 03:09:17]
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Re: Givin In
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by givingin on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:32:59 AM AEST
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You say your in the shadows, alone, waiting to die.
No one should be alone.
If you let me,
I will sit with you and wait.
maybe if I'm there?
A speck of light will break through the shadows.
MUCH LOVE
good write.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Givin In
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by cottoncandy on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:14:22 PM AEST
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| excellent write...i loved your poem...i can relate..but you have to keep fighting..sometimes i feel like giving up too, but then i see a light and it doesn't let me... |
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Re: Givin In
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by cottoncandy on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:16:38 PM AEST
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| oh....it's a five...definitely... |
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Re: Givin In
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:08:12 PM AEST
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Very sad but a masterpeice of wisdom.
i can tottally relate. Still i'll neva give up on the real thing.
Very deep, touching, emotional write.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Givin In
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:16:11 PM AEST
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| It's like reading my own vibes/feelings. I love this. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Givin In
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:33:29 PM AEST
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| exception work of art in every verse. |
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