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Strength inside the Raving…
Contributed by
QueenEEliz33
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:35:05 PM in AEST
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Strength inside the Raving.
My head is a ball of intertwining, out of control thoughts, questions, and emotions;
it leads me to never ending confusion that spins and twirls in my ignorant soul.
It is so obvious, why doesnt anyone see it?
Do I create such a mask; its hidden from the outside?
But through the twisting and turning there is visions that still stand clear.
Love and hope. Most unstable,
but the love of my friends will stay solid.
Sometimes I wonder if they werent here if I could hold on,
And the thought brings chills frozen though out my existence.
I know if I hold on I will stay strong.
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2005-01-24 16:35:05]
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Re: Strength inside the Raving…
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:01:37 PM AEST
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| The title ensnared me. I think of self-struggle as including hope, since it implies the battle is not yet done. You do well finding strength through friendship. I stand alone mostly, and find mine in a sense of humor (or irony - she says wryly). Good write! Cheers! |
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Re: Strength inside the Raving…
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:00:21 PM AEST
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| Great write. I enjoyed reading it. |
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