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Careful what you wish for
Contributed by
gimpie
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:36:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Nothing more can I give
It's hard enough to live
The trees blow softly
I float by
You ask so much of me
I just want to be free
The branches break
I float by
For both our sakes, let me go
There's nothing more you need to know
The trees crash down
I float by
Night turns to day
You turn away
The wind stops
As do I.
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gimpie
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2005-01-24 17:36:16]
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Re: Careful what you wish for
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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| It was interesting.... I think the tital should have been more eye captivating but it was good it had a nice flow... |
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