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musical suicide
Contributed by
alwayslost
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:37:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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hiding myself by day
cutting myself by night
hating myself this way
killing myself inside
losing myself in ways
unseeing to the eye
dying day by day
till nothing is left to hide
wishing and praying
for death to come
cutting and slaying
my wrists while i hum
trying to hide
all thats inside
this cut up body
hearing rumors abt myself
and pretending theyre lies
pushin the limits
to death itself
but there is no limit
to killing myself
dont do what i do
dont say what i say
dont hear what i hum
and ill go away
sooner than ever
my time is coming
my throat severed
and ill still be humming
a beautiful tune
comes from my throat
as it is being slit
a wonderful melody a soft and low note
was my cue to die
and now this is it
now i lay
cold and dead
no more melody
to ease my dread
Copyright ©
alwayslost
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2005-01-24 17:37:27]
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Re: musical suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST
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| If you want to commit suicide you can use my razor; it's electric, but you can hang yourself with the cord |
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Re: musical suicide
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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| afterdark is funny, huh? I was going to say stick your head in my oven..it's electric but you can bake your brain.. you aren't dead you wrote two lines after..you can't fool me.. |
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Re: musical suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:20:06 PM AEST
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| I like the way you blended the music in with the suicidal thoughts. Not that I'm a big fan of this kind of dark, but your creativity here is very original! |
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