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My Demise
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:22:55 PM in AEST
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As the door opens
Its no surprise
When I can't take it anymore
I'll compromise
Take a deep look inside
You'll find I'm hallow
Everyone seems unsatisfied
That I wont fallow
All I really want to do is confide
But I have to apoligize
I've changed me mind
I decide you are my demise
I'm tired of all the tears
That are faulsly cryed
Its so unclear
Why must you lie
Bound by your hand
I never bend
Down, no use for me
I thought you where my friend
As I close the door
You act surprised
I wont take it like before
And I wont compromise
For you
My demise
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ForeverAlone
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2005-01-24 22:22:55]
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Re: My Demise
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:34:36 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: My Demise
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:49:58 PM AEST
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| excellent. amazing. shut the door with a slam. =] |
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