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Hide Away Ugly One
Contributed by
kalabre
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:46:57 PM in AEST
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It is a burden to be ugly.
Its even worse when you are fugly.
A woman can be taken for granted.
Especially when her face is slanted.
Oddly shaped and way to weird.
She might as well grow a beard.
Society hates her and laughs as she walks.
Her own mother laughs even when she talks.
The fashion sense is overdone.
Shed be better off wearing a bun.
Trying so hard to simply fit in.
Her face will never bear a grin.
Running away is the only way.
Maybe she would return some day.
Or perhaps she will go on Nip/Tuck
Turning out beautiful, with enough luck.
She will sure show everyone then.
When she comes back, she will have many men.
Its all because we create the image of beautiful in one size.
So what would be beautiful if all the beautiful people died?
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kalabre
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2005-01-24 22:46:57]
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Re: Hide Away Ugly One
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:50:33 PM AEST
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| I like this alot. Society creates this image of beauty for people and when girls/guys don't fit under it they deem themselves ugly. Personally I've come to fall in love of the saying "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" Though I also believe everyone is beautiful in their own way, whether it be looks or personality. Excellent write. |
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Re: Hide Away Ugly One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:15:44 AM AEST
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| Great write with a wonderful message. I liked the flow of this poem and the last line was excellent. Nice work. |
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Re: Hide Away Ugly One
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:12:37 AM AEST
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I like the message of this write, but im not sure about the rhyming.
Is fugly even a word? Dont get me wrong i liked your poem and all, im just not sure with the ryming it looked forced, sorry.
Jane x |
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