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prisoner in love
Contributed by
bluebird
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 12:21:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Theres a look in her eyes as she tries to cover behind his lies Theres a look on her face that her mama can't even recognize Theres a fear in her walk that even her family has to stop and merely watch they watch her pass yet can't reach her at all they kno shes out of reach, no longer stands tall hes beaten her down slowly at first step by step it only got worse now, she hides her face and wont answer her calls refuses to leave the house at all shes a prisoner in love a prisoner of her heart for if she could leave it She would have a brand new start
but she loves him too much to walk away been belittled so much, she thinks she has to stay she thinks there is no other way for her heart has taken over her mind and the man she loves has beaten her blind time after time
when its all over she hears the same lines "Im sorry baby, remember next time dont p iss me off, dont get out of line" she shakes her head and agrees if only he could see hes killed her inside and out and the next time there wont be a way out shes a prisoner of her own heart if she could disown it, She would have a brand new start
the beatings continue on and on she apologizes and then hes gone out wit his next girl of the day comes back only to make it worse ambulances, and hospitals she continues to hurt
Theres a look in her eyes as she still tries to hide his lies Theres a look on her face that her mama can't even recognize hes beaten her black and blue time and time again he wont stop the pain he wont stop the abuse in the end the only thing that stops is her heart, its the final cure to a prisoner in love for now she is free & flys up above
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Re: prisoner in love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:09:23 AM AEST (User
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Wow...this is such an intense write. It seemed so real to me. As if it was all happening right before my eyes. Great job. |
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Re: prisoner in love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Arsenic on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:21:39 AM AEST (User
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As far as painting a vivid picture full of wild colors and movement... spot on! |
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