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You & I
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:10:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You & I
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You and I
Are moving in different directions
Placing blame
On each others affections
Were drifters
Looking beyond each others eyes
Placing a deaf ear
To each others cries
Were gamblers
Playing a dangerous game
Clearly seeing the facts
But playing it just the same
Were stone-faced
Stubborn to a fault
Opening new wounds
But doctoring them with salt
Were fools
Not realizing what we have
Gambling with our lives
Running up a high tab
Maybe someday well wake up
Hopefully not too late
Wipe the cobwebs from our eyes
And wipe clean the slate
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-01-25 08:10:47]
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Re: You & I
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:56:23 AM AEST
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You have described a situation I know all too well and done so with depth and finesse. I hope the last two lines become reality for you as they did for me.
You need to put the apostrophe after the "s" in others' to make it plural and you missed it in the third line.
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Re: You & I
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:08:08 AM AEST
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described life and situations with great taste and yes I hope your able to wipe the slate clean and move on
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Re: You & I
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by mistersarang on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST
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i was just there. i understand the feelings.
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