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Thank You
Contributed by
fielding88
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thank you.
I want to thank you,
Its the least I can do.
You were a portion of my life
I couldnt give away.
Until today.
Ive seen so many fears,
So many tears
that came with you.
And Ive dreamed so many dreams
just wishing I could be with you.
I want this world to fall apart.
I just want a fresh start.
You were my direction.
I went running to your loving hand.
And now without you in my life
I dont know where I stand.
I have a place to choose today,
But here, I cannot stay.
This feeling calling out to me
Brings with it a freedom shared
With no one else in this world,
I should be feeling scared.
Its calling, I can see it
I cant stand to look away.
This calling feels so true.
Feels so new.
I cant believe its not coming from you
But I knew,
The day would come that you
Wouldnt see me through.
Id have to stand on my own two feet,
Reject the hands that I would meet.
If nothing else Ive learned from you
Its that
No matter what I do
I always seem to find a way
To wish I hadnt lived today.
Copyright ©
fielding88
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2005-01-25 17:23:40]
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Re: Thank You
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:41:12 PM AEST
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| wow this is good |
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Re: Thank You
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by ElatedNBliss on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:55:15 PM AEST
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| i like this.... very nice peom |
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Re: Thank You
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by jjones12 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:14:17 PM AEST
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That's what happend to me, but with a guy! Great write!
=Jen=
WB |
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Re: Thank You
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:01:43 PM AEST
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| excellent poem, marc. i loved the ending. well i must say i thank the day that you live today, so that i can read your poetry. |
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Re: Thank You
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:56:10 PM AEST
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Very nice write Marc, I liked it a lot. I think the second and third stanzas are most descriptive the fourth and fifth are full of emotion and feeling. The first and last are beautiful. Great write.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Thank You
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:27:43 AM AEST
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Maybe... maybe the things we really want and don't get teach us to let go, in a way. Whatever. I really liked the poem. Rather interesting.
Take care.
David |
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