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A Breath Away
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:49:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When youre scared and alone
You feel youre falling apart
Your love is cold as stone
When it breaks your heart
I want you to know
And never should you doubt
I know your heart and soul
I know what youre about
To find your peace and calm
To ease your wearied soul
I am a soothing balm
Together, we are whole
With phone, e-mail or pen,
Thoughts and feelings, youll relay
Youll remember then,
Im just a breath away
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-01-26 08:49:48]
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Re: A Breath Away
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:59:00 AM AEST
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this is so touching. i like the second stansa the best. very well done.
~keep the faith~
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Re: A Breath Away
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:58:48 AM AEST
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love you style, and the flow of the poem. great job, awesome subject....props for the title as well.
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Re: A Breath Away
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:28:16 AM AEST
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| ~ just a breath away... that is gorgeous.. |
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