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Loves first taste
Contributed by
shattereddaydreams
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:08:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the silence
Our problems feed
The love we felt
eventually receeds
we hate each other
we find the other a waste
but we still remeber
how we shared loves first taste
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2005-01-26 09:08:13]
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Re: Loves first taste
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:11:01 AM AEST
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what a magnificent piece of truth you have writtin. hope to see more of it.
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: Loves first taste
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:27:27 AM AEST
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that was lovely too! so short and to the point but full of truth as bluebird said.
keep posting! x |
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Re: Loves first taste
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by valek on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:12:26 AM AEST
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| short, sweet and DEFINITELY to the point. beauitful write, i enjoyed it very much, cant wait to read more -valek- |
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Re: Loves first taste
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:04:44 PM AEST
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| I think it's safe to say that you've got a real capacity for telling the truth in your work, and it all seems sound so sincere and relatable. Really amazing work you've done. |
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