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dangerous boy
Contributed by
shattereddaydreams
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:11:24 AM in AEST
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He knew she was vunerable
He took her hand and made her believe
She fell in love with this dangeruos boy
never asking of his past or present
dreaming only of now and forever
He knew what he was doing
he wanted it all
she gave it to him
believing in love
Blind to his lies
She handed him her heart
and felt him tear it apart
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Re: dangerous boy
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:14:03 AM AEST
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wow,i hoped for anothe piece of truth by you and here it is! not a disapointment.
great work. you got sum talent runnin in your veins.
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: dangerous boy
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:52:27 AM AEST
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Ohh this is good, very nicely done.
I love this thanks for posting.
Jane x |
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Re: dangerous boy
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:22:45 AM AEST
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| very strong..and passionate. great |
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Re: dangerous boy
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:23:20 AM AEST
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this was brilliant, you've found words to exactly describe how hundreds of people have felt.
particularly liked
"never asking of his past or present
dreaming only of now and forever"
short and simple but really really effective. am going to read the rest of your stuff now x |
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Re: dangerous boy
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:57:45 PM AEST
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| I've seen this happen over and over and nobody realizes it till its too late, then they cry on my shoulder. Ive never had it happen to me, but by now I kno the feelin...and you really got it all in this poem. Great stuff |
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