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STOP!
Contributed by
valek
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:29:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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i've been up for way too long
drilling a cavity in my brain
mind spinning, uncontrollable
driving me far past insane
i keep breathing this white vapor
its better if i stay high
never have i felt so alive
and dead at the same time
there has to be something better for me
there has to be a better future for me to see
there has to be someone out there who cares
there has to be something, somewhere out there
i keep injecting these into
itching, empty veins
my eyes are dry and sore
driving in the wrong lane
cold empty desolate death
is all thats left for me
i need to find a way
to get away, to get free
there has to be something better for me
there has to be a better future for me to see
there has to be someone out there who cares
there has to be something, somewhere out there
i wish i could come back down
wish i could find myself again
what if this is who i am now
i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could stop, i wish i could STOP! (dead)
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Re: STOP!
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:32:42 AM AEST
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very emotional and powerful....gripping. i like the ending, and the line
-i keep injecting these into
itching, empty veins-
and although you're clean, the demon will always be there. be strong....
the raven |
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Re: STOP!
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by Rashi4Evie66 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:21:30 PM AEST
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| I LOVE this poem. I think that its nice that you're comfortable with takling about it and experiencing it. I was once suicidal, I'm going to write a poem about it too. But The demon is still there in some cases. Just kepp yourslef on the right track and live each day to the fulliest.-Rashi4Evie66 |
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Re: STOP!
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by marshmalloska on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:39:12 PM AEST
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| well done for both winning the struggle, and writing about it so wonderfully too |
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